Just watched it, and I like it! I guess you may need some other voice actors (specially for the girl), other then that, really good.
Others may find it too slow, but I like the fact that you take your time for the storytelling. So we have the chance to learn more about the characters you created, a little patience lead to a lot of fun - Good Toon, at least for me! :-D
Uberredheadofdoom
IT'S ABOUT FREAKING TIME!
Just kidding, of course. Nice job!